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Post by Fyri on Mar 14, 2021 11:53:21 GMT -5
Rhyming riddles is as much a staple of Redwall as fabulous feasts and arduous adventures so how about we try to make riddle of revelation ourselves?
Concept is simpler than the answer to the the little people!!!
We each add a new line to the riddle. I was thinking to go with the simple AABB rhyming schema for now. So, two lines rhyme with each other, then the next two lines with each other, and so on.
(Rather poor) example: 1) On the table lay a hat (A)
2) where for a while it sat (A)
3) until a dibbun made a grab (B )
4) and claimed it for his DAB! (B )
We'll start off pretty generic and vague!
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Harken, ye beast, if tis my treasure ye seek
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Post by Celebes on Mar 14, 2021 12:19:48 GMT -5
Then seek ye first the statue meek,
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Post by Fyri on Mar 14, 2021 15:52:34 GMT -5
Of beast not mice nor badger lord
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Post by Celebes on Mar 14, 2021 19:57:54 GMT -5
But he of those who walk the ford.
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Post by Madeline on Mar 14, 2021 22:42:53 GMT -5
Underneath the sculpture tall
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Post by Fyri on Mar 15, 2021 7:02:43 GMT -5
In seasons after fall
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Post by Celebes on Mar 15, 2021 9:57:21 GMT -5
Seek ye the lay of first light
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Post by Fyri on Mar 15, 2021 11:05:50 GMT -5
In the wake of moonless night
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Post by Celebes on Mar 15, 2021 13:34:46 GMT -5
Dig three paces from the sentinels gaze
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Post by Fyri on Mar 15, 2021 15:12:08 GMT -5
Where entrance lay to my maze
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Fluffbelle
Active Dibbun
Still around, site looks great! Hello to all!
Posts: 56 
Main: Bunny Rabbit
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Post by Fluffbelle on Mar 16, 2021 10:05:32 GMT -5
Where shines the moon on scented bloom
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Post by Celebes on Mar 16, 2021 10:05:42 GMT -5
(Edit: Sniped by a rabbit?!)
Peek in thy snout and embrace the gloom
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Post by Fyri on Mar 16, 2021 12:41:01 GMT -5
For within there is no escape
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Post by Madeline on Mar 16, 2021 21:35:17 GMT -5
Until, for good or ill, thou meets thy fate
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Post by Celebes on Mar 17, 2021 22:42:15 GMT -5
So take heed my dearest beast
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Well, they're in the kitchen now so if you want you can have him end up there maybe? Or near them?
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