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Post by Aurelias & Vernados on Aug 8, 2016 10:58:00 GMT -5
Name:Aurelias Leafblade Species:Squirrel Gender:Male Dibbun Weapon:Blowpipe with Thorns Adult Weapon:Long Sword
Appearance: Aurelias is very thin throughout his life, but as a dibbun had a chubby face, his fur being a dark blondish color. He also always wears casual clothes, and almost never wears formal clothes, ever.
Personality: As a dibbun Aurelias was very shy, during dorm pillow fights, he sat in the corner reading a picture book, but outgrew it and became more social with all the beasts at the abbey when he matured. Throughout his life, Aurelias was a really big germaphobe about most of his belongings, including all of his casual clothes, and every little part of his bed is off limits. Aurelias also is very picky about choosing food to eat, if he sees a food for dinner he doesn't like, he says "I'm not hungry!", but if it is a food he likes, he will sit down and eat. This lasted throughout his life.
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Post by Otus Shortwing on Aug 8, 2016 15:35:12 GMT -5
Hey Auri! I know there are technically no "rules" about how long a mini-profile should be, but I need to ask you to write a few more sentences before your badge is awarded. For instance, we don't even know what color Aurelius' fur is! Try to describe him and his clothing in more detail for the appearance section. In the personality section, try telling us more about Aurelius and how he reacts to things. "Shy" and "outgoing" are very broad terms, after all. He doesn't seem shy in the dibbun RPs--so in what situations is he shy? And in what ways is he more outgoing as an adult? Use descriptive words. For instance, as adults, I would say both Otus and Valeriana are outgoing. But I describe Otus as bold, brash, and loud, and Valeriana as grumpy, calculating, and nosy (not noisy! She pries into otherbeasts' business ). So you see they are very different characters, but if I only used the word "outgoing" to sum them up, you wouldn't know that. Aurelius is also a unique character, so write a little bit more about him to show us why he's unique!
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Post by Aurelias & Vernados on Aug 9, 2016 5:34:08 GMT -5
I am working on it, thanks for the pointers! It's developing slowly though because I am getting busy
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Post by Otus Shortwing on Aug 9, 2016 6:12:22 GMT -5
I understand! Life can get busy, don't worry about that. Just ping me or message me when you'd like me to review it again for the badge.
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